Story's pretty good, but the animations are awful. Fix that and you'd have something real good.
The story that emerged from the first set of clicks I made has a lot of bite. Especially the casual pick-up on the rebound - mmmm.
The graphics could use a little more rounding, warming and - err - humanising, with liquid spill if possible, since they are a bit stiff, wooden, and I am not sure why the hero has to be quite such a dry "1950s chartered accountant" type. Perhaps that's a horror staple. (I'm not a Horror fan.)
Yet to try alternate plots, but at first play. Good effort - commended.
its really well done i like the different endings and i love to play and find them all keep up the good work
To be fair, this is really bad gave it 5/5. I just laughed soo much. Characters, dialog and expecialy that dancing scene... i mean, I was crying from laughter. Great job, even tho it was unintndet. Keep doing the good work.
What is the first song is in the background?
The song is Unpromised by Kevin Macleod.
All songs in this VN are by Kevin Macleod, licensed under a creative commons license.
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