neonskuller This is just a planet of the apes ripoff, it has quite a few grammar and spelling issues and is really boring. Try to make something a little more original, get somebody to read what you wrote and make it longer, and you will be heading in the right direction.
The Island
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This is a Text-Based Adventure!
You wake up and don't know where you are, what happened, and what todo!
But you know, if you stay you might die!
Can you Escape the Island?
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As others already mentioned, you should really work on those spelling errors. The story is really well done and thrilling, but the spelling mistakes are kinda ruining it. Overall great game tho.
VicariousE Aside from the simple and sometimes erroneous text, I rather liked it! The layout was perfect and easy to read. Checkpoint system worked very well. The script could've been a little more descriptive, and the addition of a few scenery pictures, would've made this game perfect.
Its good but grammar issues and there was a swear word and this is an E rated game. So you should make the game rating higher.
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2.67 / 5.00
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