Entertaining

So all though this was kind of a short flick it was ok I like the visuals you put in on this it was rather entertaining and you have a nice flow of animation here on this the toon was actually funny and made me laugh and chuckle so nice job indeed. hope you make more of this someday.

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I would just suggest making it longer and adding more short clips with it.

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In the the beginning when the episode 1 title appeared and it was missing the "e" at the end it kind of ruined it for me. The basic animation was decent. I liked the old 1920's cartoon idea and I got that vibe from it right away. It would look alot better if the borders and lines on the characters and backgrounds weren't so thick. I didn't understand what was happening in the story either.