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The 2016 Presidental Election is drawing near and I am still undecided. But i think i have found a way to choose who to vote for!
Special Thanks to Chris Neri (voice of game show host)
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Very funny cartoon and it's the best cartoon uploaded this week in my opinion. Although it was really good, I think you can improve on a few things to make it better. I think the intro and outro slates are very bland and could use more color and maybe some animations (like moving credits, dancing, magic, etc). I also think you should just throw out the intro slate because it interrupts the flow of the joke. One last thing to consider, the end should always be the funniest joke so that way audiences are left off with a laugh (the most common thing is to just add a fart sound effect and it works nearly 100% of the time to make people laugh). Your end joke was a bit dry and the "Live long eat cheese" was kind of like a stop sign for all laughs. I would have done a "will of the prophets" and just show a little skit like the camera pans up to the sky to show a constellation of Trump's face and have some holy music play in the background. Overall, the drawings and lip syncs were well done, the jokes made me laugh, every joke was timed perfectly, and your voice acting fit this very well. I'm looking forward to see what else you could make.
Thank you for four you feedback. They very helpful, I'm trying out some of your suggestions on my next one and again thank you.
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