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Living with Lolly EP2

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So it's been a while but I actually finished Episode 2... I kind of fell into the same trap I did with Episode 1, constantly adding or removing things, redrawing the older parts and getting into this constant loop of trying to fix everything.

But here it is ^_^ I guess Episode 1 was like the test pilot and this is where I'm trying to define where the series will go. Now it's just a case of breaking down the plot points into manageable segments... I don't think another 19 minute long episode is the way to go >_<

Thank you to everyone who helped with this, especially the wonderful voice cast who lend their talent to my dumb anime bullshit.

I'm starting work on Episode 3 really soon, so if anyone is interesting in being part of the project, drop me an IM ^_^

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Really nice work

Wow I have to say for the 19 min you talk about it is some really good and vibrant stuff the voices came off very well there some good talent in them there voices so props to you for those voice actors

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It's solid work I found that from start to finish this was beautiful in almost every way so no changes at this time

~X~

This was well worth the wait!

holy shit. you used Fantastic Planet-like themes nad music. I LOVE YOU FOREVER.

Mistress Lolly, I want to serve and worship you!

Wow, this second episode has been a long time coming. And it feels like it's got a bit more edge than the first episode and I like that. The opening dream sequence was very creepy and creative with a moody and unsettling atmosphere.

The plot of the story is still paper thin, though. The lore of your world needs a little more fleshing out and motives of the characters need to be established better. So far the entire plot feels like a pretense to have Lolly shock people with her naked presence and flirtatious personality.

KenOhSama responds:

Hey thanks for the feedback man ^_^ one of the hardest things has been trying to work more of the story into scenes, it takes a lot of planning on how to do these things because I just don't have the manpower or skill to animate some of the stuff I'd like to do >_< so it's kind of a compromise on what to keep and what to save for later.
With Episode 3 I plan on focusing more on specific character motives, give a little more backstory and whatnot, and hopefully things will build from there x3

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