This was well worth the wait!
holy shit. you used Fantastic Planet-like themes nad music. I LOVE YOU FOREVER.
Mistress Lolly, I want to serve and worship you!
Wow, this second episode has been a long time coming. And it feels like it's got a bit more edge than the first episode and I like that. The opening dream sequence was very creepy and creative with a moody and unsettling atmosphere.
The plot of the story is still paper thin, though. The lore of your world needs a little more fleshing out and motives of the characters need to be established better. So far the entire plot feels like a pretense to have Lolly shock people with her naked presence and flirtatious personality.
Hey thanks for the feedback man ^_^ one of the hardest things has been trying to work more of the story into scenes, it takes a lot of planning on how to do these things because I just don't have the manpower or skill to animate some of the stuff I'd like to do >_< so it's kind of a compromise on what to keep and what to save for later.
With Episode 3 I plan on focusing more on specific character motives, give a little more backstory and whatnot, and hopefully things will build from there x3
Why make something mature and censor it?!
Makes as much sense as buying a hotdog and throw out the sossage cuse it is unhealthy.
My entire diet consists of hotdog buns...
Also I never planned on LWL being strictly mature, it's definitely meant to push the boundaries in that regard, but in more of a teasing way than anything x3