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my first complete animation

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this is made using a crappy laptop, and a mouse and keyboard so unprofessional, but I managed to create something out of it.

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Nice, the animation was well synced with the audio. Lines were sketchy but since you used a mouse that's understandable, the characters movements were still very smooth. Their actions could have used a bit more exaggeration and anticipation, but I'm just nitpicking now so that this comment seems longer and more thoughtful. Heh.


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It seems like a test animation, add more details, sound effects are decent, if your going to keep using it stay conistent with sound quality, like one sound effect sounds high quality, but another sounds low quality.


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Jas0NKarIM responds:

The sounds where recorded using my Iphone, and there was some ambient sound, I'm wondering how you considered some to be


Eh. It will do, we all gotta start some where.


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This is good! Great timing


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442
Votes
85
Score
2.26 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 8, 2016
10:38 AM EDT
Genre
Experimental