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Racism and bad parenting. No wonder so many children end up on the street.

Youtube version: https://youtu.be/oyXWH7C6OV8

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i feel bad for the mother

Funny and nice animation!

This was pretty funny. I even found myself in the process of saying "karma is a bitch" near the ending. Also, I love your style. Very reminiscent of Sexual-Lobster.

That cruiser should have said PCPD: Politically Correct Police Department

I think this had the potential to be funnier if the creator made more comments about the overall topic of the video: bad parenting makes asshole kids. Like, if the bully said, "My parents let me browse the internet supervised, so I never learned how to respectfully talk to people." A joke like that seems kind of like the creator's style.

Overall, I felt the animation was well done. But to be honest, I wasn't sure if the voice acting for the bully was meant to sound a little unauthentic. Like, it didn't sound too believable that's how someone would sound. But the rest of the acting was fine.

In future animations, I hope to see either more jokes in quick videos, or perhaps more animated action in longer videos. Still a good video, so I'm going with 4/5 stars.

OcelotVA responds:

Thanks, I'll do my best to improve on those points.
The bully was voiced by my friend who never did voices in english before.
I've done it before but it was the first time for him. I think he did a good job though. He made the kid sound like a spoiled brat, which is what i was going for.

Joke was pretty darn solid, so as the animation and voice acting, not a fan of main character pick tho, but still very nice vid! :D

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3.92 / 5.00

Oct 3, 2016
9:25 PM EDT
Comedy - Original
  • Daily Feature October 5, 2016