Halo Girls Pilot

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Edit: thank you Tom Fulp for front page.

:Music by Boom Kitty

:Credits music is GhostLawyer

Every thing else besides sound effects was made by me. sound effects were found online and edited, only 1 sound effect i made i believe.

Story of this toon: i was scared of making this cause i was-int good enough but after talking about it i decided to do it, it showed me i have a lot more to learn and made me see how to get better, this cartoon could of been done way better. if i made this a show i couldn't cause im no way near the level i want it to be, do i want to make more yes and no i dont know if i did. it wouldnt be in a very very very long time pretty much i need to practice and get better at my skills in art honestly. I appreciate this cartoon for it pushing me to get better

I love the main characters i made and have so much fun with them doing story's i just wish i could of wrote this better, bad writing and animation needs work. on a lot of the story wasn't explain or explained the main characters, but any ways thanks for watching .

P.s thanks Tom Fulp for making this site i love it for sharing creation and making cartoons, i think it,s lovely and might help people maybe to make them better at art making art friends and helping each other out.


this is very interesting

ehm, good animation, but the character design needs some work.

Dood that was absolutely awesome, really tantalized my animation tastebuds with this one! The animation was very fluid, and I like the unique art style you use. Can't wait to see more!!!

Crashgen responds:

Aw thank you, your animation is super!!

This was very nice.
The art honestly reminds me of early onepunch webmanga so you just need some practice.
I can totally see this as an extended opening for a show.
Keep up the good work and stay awesome.

well there's ups and downs. the concept. is good. the animation? is actually really good but it is obvious your either fairly young or really new to drawing either way its just a lack of over all experience. and i cannot stress enough that its not a BAD thing to be inexperienced. the art work is very rough though the way it was animated give me insanely high hopes that it will improve with time. i can give this a lot more praise than some of the stuff i see so good work. Tom Front paged you because he sees the potential for greatness in this. KEEP PRACTICING and you will likely become a great animator :)

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3.19 / 5.00

Oct 1, 2016
3:19 AM EDT