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This was nice
I like the action in this and the joke scenes but seems like it could be speed up more some added tempo speed ups would really work well on this one I do like how this flowed out well and hope to see more from you
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Speed up the tempo of the scenes
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good job
The joke is good but the tempo is lost quickly due to these action gaps which don't help the joke in any way. Rated 2 just because timing here ruined it for me, the idea is pretty good m8.
thats pretty good! I love the joke, but try to master your volumes a bit, the voices were a bit soft, and try to learn about lipsyncing, other than that, awesome job!!
glad you enjoyed it, I am trying to master lip syncing, and i do agree that the voices were a bit quiet, thank you!
Loved the idea for this cartoon, the animations were really comedic. However your lip-syncing could use a bit of work. Other than that great job man! Keep doing what your doing.
I'm so glad you liked it!