heh heh. I think it would have been stronger if the entire thing had been in that sketch-y style, rather than the filled in style.

Very cute. I love the crow drawing.

Ok, sorry I don't know Russian but here is my review.
Your plot at first I don't understand, but later on, it is creepy as f#k.
Your art somehow is quite strange, the bird looks perfect but other things look not as good as the bird.
3.5 stars.