You wanted it to look old? Well... I think it mostly turned out to sound old-I remember such audio quality in some old flash parodies on youtube. If you've encountered such videos and you wanted to imitate them I can't really judge the artstyle or animation because it wasn't the point of them. They needed to have anything moving/changing positions once in a while to an audio clip.
Since I'm not sure I'm just going to say that you've chosen quite boring audio clip.
Thank you for the response! I know it didn't come across the way I wanted it to, so it's great to hear your feedback on why. :)
The writing was pretty funny, good job on that. The vocal quality is pretty bad though, there were some parts where I couldn't understand at all what was being said. As far as animation is concerned, it's pretty lazy, but it's also a 2 minute cartoon so I understand cutting corners. Just some things to look out for next time, keep working on it, dude! You'll get better with each cartoon. Good luck to you!
Thank you for the tips! It means a lot. :)