Transmission From The Moon

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My first flash animation. I tried to make it look old, but I think it came off as lazy. :P


You wanted it to look old? Well... I think it mostly turned out to sound old-I remember such audio quality in some old flash parodies on youtube. If you've encountered such videos and you wanted to imitate them I can't really judge the artstyle or animation because it wasn't the point of them. They needed to have anything moving/changing positions once in a while to an audio clip.

Since I'm not sure I'm just going to say that you've chosen quite boring audio clip.

plasticapple responds:

Thank you for the response! I know it didn't come across the way I wanted it to, so it's great to hear your feedback on why. :)

The writing was pretty funny, good job on that. The vocal quality is pretty bad though, there were some parts where I couldn't understand at all what was being said. As far as animation is concerned, it's pretty lazy, but it's also a 2 minute cartoon so I understand cutting corners. Just some things to look out for next time, keep working on it, dude! You'll get better with each cartoon. Good luck to you!

plasticapple responds:

Thank you for the tips! It means a lot. :)

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1.97 / 5.00

Sep 11, 2016
2:42 PM EDT
Comedy - Original