You fail to understand the concept of "speed paint." Newgrounds is for people to post their animations, art, music, and games. This is not an animation, nor is it art; although the finished work definitely would be. Your art is good, but this was slow and pointless. Sorry, but I just can't get behind this submission.
It's all good bro like I said in the last comment there will be improvements in future
Nice one, you should actually do like one page/per video and in major speed that that, it would be better for the audience to see the comic advance more than just the first box.
The next video that we are releasing is pretty much with some minor improvements but ya Iam looking to speed up videos in the future so it won't be boring for the audience but thank you for your advice