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Welcoming the noobie!

rated 2.95 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Sep 2, 2016 | 9:09 AM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place September 4, 2016

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I felt this is worthy of being uploaded here, seeing as there's something worth of criticism. Like the lip sync.....(Please help me, advice, tips, anything.)

Anyways I hope you can get a laugh out of it and hopefully it's worthy of being here!



Rated 3 / 5 stars

I don't have tips but you've got what is the bad part already. Sometimes it seems the sound is waiting for the picture to get right, and sometimes it's the opposite, but only in a few scenes.
I'm here only to say that the facial expressions were the best I've seen!!! Really awesome!
The rest will come with time, I guess.

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

The animation could use some work, like some more inbetweens...
The voice work is pretty decent...
The story felt like this isn't the first episode, like I started watching on the second or third part...
Apart from these problems it was an interesting watch and I hope to see more from you.

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cuteveemon responds:

Thank you so much for that buuut could you explain what you mean by "inbetweens"? I think I have a clue what you mean buuuut if you could tell me, I'll DEFINTELY know what you're talkin' about.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

A little more color and slightly better sound and your golden.

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I like where this could go.
PS: what`s the end credit song?

cuteveemon responds:

Paper moon-soul eater