Not bad ,i love death as a women lmao,read some of the other comments and wow they are brutal but it strives to make you better when you think about it only thing i can agree on with them is come back and finish it as far as hearing the mouse clicks in the background and all the other little details other people posted and criticized on screw them!! but a great work must be finished i know it takes time but it will be worth it in the end ;)

I didn't really like this movie because the second half felt so forced.

I assume you became bored working on the same cartoon for too long.

Have you tried drawing Fay characters in brand new ways?

Try doing different colored outlines more often.

Try using more subtle colors in your backgrounds to contrast against your characters.

Your characters should be more colorful than the backgrounds.

Stage objects in your backgrounds to attract attention to your characters.

Do whatever is necessary to keep yourself entertained while working on these movies.

Don't allow yourself to stagnate as an artist or you'll become bored.

Keep making those new movies because they will be awesome as always.

-Mightydein

This is terrible

You recorded your audio badly and i know you dont have to have the best mic to make cartoonss but i can literally hear your fucking mouse click when you start and stop recording. The carachters and linework are ugly and i know you may call this a "style" but its just you being shit at drawing. The colors seemed to be picked from the default color swtch of flash which makes this cartoon even more laughable. The one joke about the death guy wanting to date a duck was cringeworthy and came across ams trying too hard woth the draminizations that followed.

AND ANOTHER THING
I read your response to AtomicAstro's review and it made you come across as such a fucking douchebag.He said aa simple thing stating that cartoons that arent finished shouldnt be uploaded and you came back with willcamick responds:
o_O Why dont you go tell Miss Finster on me there Randall. What did Papa Smurf say? Shut up I do what I want and if you dont like it you can go suck a lemon.

"But all jokes aside shut up. People like you are why I stopped posting my work to NG in the first place. You make a few shit animations and think your king of the shit stains. "

Just because someone states a clear rule doesnt make him an asshole. Also the fact that you said reviews like his are the reason you stopped coming to newgrounds in the firstplace irritates me. I hate it when shitty artists come to NG and post shitty art and cartoons get reviews that are completly 100% provable and get angry and complain about how Newgrounds is a mean site full of cyber bullies. Maybe dont put up work thats unfinished and terrible and you wont get such mean reviews, loser.

Regardless of the cartoon itself, you're not supposed to upload incomplete work onto NG.

nice gay for a skeleton. love it