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A short story-based horror game that focuses on a mentally-unbalanced girl named Yun.

It is a short game I made for a college project and its the first game I ever made so I apologize if the quality is lacking somewhat.

Known bugs:

- Character in cutscenes aren't always aligned to gameplay scene.
- Character has collision issues with doors and occasionally causes sound bugs
- Some pop-up info boxes might require you to walk around several times to trigger. Not sure why.
- During final decision scene, boxes are still solid, (my bad for not removing collision) but other than that, as long as u don't walk around while making the choice, there isn't any problems.

Pls enjoy~! And comment what I can improve on besides those I've already listed myself (And yes I know its a really SHORT game, no need to remind me, thank you. )

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I would like t see a continuation of this, ik this is necro post but, i take this like a demo of a great potential thta can be exploited, hope you still active haha well done :)

Due to the big sister's diary, was Yun the one who killed all of them? Or at least her other personality or something like that? The two decisions in the end made it a bit too easy to see ehich ending you would get, but overall the game was definitely better than I thought it would be!! You should do more horror games!

OneManRektArmy responds:

Thanks m8~ I appreciate the support!

This game was good for what it was trying to be. It's not a perfect game, but I respect what it is doing. The art style is perfect for the game, and the music is good too. I don't know if the family is killing themselves or what, but both endings are... okay. If you like short games with very simple plots, this is your game to play. Easily rated 3.5 stars.

It has some promise. The art style is really interesting. I think a simple thing that would make it better would be if you could use wasd instead of arrows.

I choose to interpret the good end as her finding Onii-san before he could kill himself and they get psychiatric help together. Clearly their family has a history of mental illness (if the other deaths are really suicide). But you've included some things that point toward foul play. The dad was stabbed in the back as well as hanged, not likely he would stab himself. Onee-san seems to kill Yun in the bad end, so its possible she killed the parents before killing herself. And it is not clear if Onii-san was really hurt or if the blood on him was from the others. My only suggestion is that if this is supposed to be a mental health PSA you should make it less ambiguous in the end. You could also make use of the bug in the final choice by having the "hope" box float away out of reach if you take too long to decide.

OneManRektArmy responds:

Interesting username and an interesting suggestion. I'll consider that the next time I make play around with psych horror again. Thanks for the input.

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