Nice, The style was clean, expressive and pretty refreshing to look at, and the amount of frame by frame animation was enjoyable, I do agree that the script could've got some more going on (maybe a 2nd punchline to make it seem more complete, or maybe a way to turn it into a loop), but overall it's a nice result for such a short challenge.
Keep it up!
One star for the fancy *shaky* comic-animation. One star for the decent audio. And one star for the effort. This is more noir than comedy, if not experimental. Needs expansion. How about he chokes on a chicken bone and then, uh... something, something, Simpsons did it.