It's a neat animation and I have the feeling that it's good-hearted, but sadly, I have some problems understanding what is going on. Did you save Coleen and then forget about her? Did she save you and you were ungrateful and then sorry about that?
I wish you would have added some more content in the author comments.
Then again, maybe it's to personal to wrote about, a fight against inner demons, who knows? At least your animation made me think about it, and I would say that's always a good sign :)