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This is a joke so don't start crying
ok this was good
I wanted to give you at least 2/5 because the lip-sync and the animation is actually ok, but all the other problems ruined any chance of this being saved:
1. The biggest problem with this is that you should've had more color in the video, or at least fill in all the characters because you could literally see right through them. And if it's because you couldn't color them in, make sure all the lines are connected to each other to form any kind of shape. The bucket tool wont color any shape that is broken or wide open.
2. The artwork is pretty bad. It really needs more work put into it.
3. A nitpick here, but at 0:35 you should've drawn out everybody instead of just copying and "folding" some of them to make it look like there looking in the same direction.
4. At 0:45, again if you're going to copy characters at least make it less obvious. I say this because 2 of the guys in this shot has the "bro army" on their shirts backwards.
Don't think I'm hating on you, I'm only giving constructive criticism. And I hope you take my advice and try to improve in the future. And as for this submission, don't be surprised if it gets blamed.
Great one x')
Full on cringe video not really funny and the voices sounds like they came from kids below 10 years old so just one star
I'm you're age.Nuff said
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