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Fourth episode is here! ^_^
Watch it on youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAFl3R_P9l0
Not bad, the structure is good and in fact is funny but the animation could be more progressive than this sequence.
Nice Story-telling and selection of the music. If you can add a little more animation, to push some of the key moments, might be even better. But that's just me. : )
Thank you :)
Aww, now I'm hungry. The animation was pretty good. The last joke was pretty funny. The music did help the animation, but I feel like the animation could use something extra to it. I don't know what exactly, but it didn't give the "umph factor" (I realize this isn't a thing but work with me here) that could bump this to be 5 stars. I think what I'm looking for are more professionally delivered story. I'm sorry if this review doesn't make sense, but good animation overall.
Thanks for commenting! I'll try to get better :)
Love the style, love the art, love the little stories you tell. Keep them coming!
Thank you! ^_^
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