Very nice

A good laff. Is funny.

The cartoon itself wasn't bad, my only problem with this is that the whole thing feels like a bootleg Oney cartoon. I can tell you take influence from Oney and Psychicpebbles, like many do on newgrounds, but the expressions, style, and voice acting just feels like a carbon copy of their style. I don't mean to sound rude, or mean, I just see this type of thing happening kind of often nowadays. I do think you have potential, and hope you expand on your skills in the future, adding your own twist to what you make :)

Nevertheless, great 1st Newgrounds animation, it certainly was better than my first cartoon.

I honestly saw that coming, description made it too obvious nice animation though.

It even may happen for good.