A good laff. Is funny.

The cartoon itself wasn't bad, my only problem with this is that the whole thing feels like a bootleg Oney cartoon. I can tell you take influence from Oney and Psychicpebbles, like many do on newgrounds, but the expressions, style, and voice acting just feels like a carbon copy of their style. I don't mean to sound rude, or mean, I just see this type of thing happening kind of often nowadays. I do think you have potential, and hope you expand on your skills in the future, adding your own twist to what you make :)

Nevertheless, great 1st Newgrounds animation, it certainly was better than my first cartoon.

I honestly saw that coming, description made it too obvious nice animation though.

It even may happen for good.

Great work. You really should work on the voice acting otherwise it was good.