Your accent makes you a bit difficult to understand. I'd recommend having a volunteer voice actor help you, or use text.
There's potential in your work. Honestly, this could have been funny, but wasn't as well executed. Successful parodies I've seen do one of two things: one is they show something frustrating about a series we can all relate to. Like, when someone lands a critical hit on us in battle. Or why can't we capture fainted pokemon? Two, is they exaggerate common issues. Like an episode I saw where Metapod kept using harden, so it took like 100 turns to defeat it.