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Life : Pilot or Something

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Life. I want to do more with this idea of a short and this is my first really attempt at something like that. Im not really sure if people find this type of stuff funny and if do plz give a good rating or something like that.

Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCB9GQM7dd4lGEg0l6f5IAbg

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Eh..animation is fine..but the story is just..bad, I can't understand it, and its just...what's happening? And it doesn't make sense at times.



I did not really laugh , but this looks like a good animation! Good job and keep doing what you are doing! ;)



Good job, but you can do beter at the at. I know it. Keep improving!



This was actually alright. You should do more, but my one criticism is it'd add much more personality to the characters if you made their mouths move. Maybe make the lines a little less shakey though, but that's just my opinion. Good job overall!


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631
Faves:
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Votes
102
Score
2.72 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 7, 2016
8:30 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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