It was alright. I actually thought that thee would be a little bit of more effect (with drama),but meh.
For an animation that's made by someone I assume is only doing them in his pure free time while he trys to recover from students loans.so a few extra stars.
Glad you took our advice ( or passive aggressive suggestions) on the text
but its still not good, outro is too long.
the mouth movements aren't good either. when talking the top of the mouths dont move in real life, only the jaw, although "once" looked alright; I think the mouth movements would look better if you kept what I said in mind,
Eh, nice visuals, but the lipsync wasn't all that great. I recommend you look up the "mouth-a-bet" and some lipsyncing tutorials.
good movie, with very nice visuals, good face expressions, a fluid animation, and a good style in general.
also, you've followed my advice on making the capital yellow letters less visible, (and more abstract), and now we can (finally) see the main character's cool face expressions!
good work, because those huge yellow letters were getting in the way, and they were kinda annoying... but now, with the quick fade-out/dissapearance of the said yellow letters, things are better.
i prefer this version of the movie, its alot better. (in all fields).
good work, nice animation, i would like to see more movies from you, you make cool stuff, so
keep up the good work!
good lip sync 5/5