You just stole random clipart and put it into your cartoon. Look, If you can't draw, just ask someone to animate this for you. Using clipart makes you look incredibly lazy and unprofessional. As for the plot, it goes all over the place. First he's at the hospital, then he's at the store, and then it ends? Huh? The plot went by way too fast and there's no pacing whatsoever. He's at the hospital then he's at the store. No explanation why, he's just at the store and then he says "That chocolate bar is 500 bucks huhuhuh". Did him jumping off the bridge give him brain damage or is he just a dumb kid? No explanation to anything. You didn't introduce the characters. I know this is your first submission so I'm going to go easy on you. Hopefully in the future your cartoons get better.