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Box V.S. Paper

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my first animation i managed to finish

time period: i forgot, maybe around 1 - 2 months

12 fps

couple thosuand and few frames

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man this has a old ng feel that i miss, so great job man hope u make more

R-Pivot responds:

thanks

also, weird thing. this animation has a 2 star rating, and i've been seeing 4.5 - 5 star reviews

:| weird

a really cool animation, its very good. (especially if we consider that this is your first movie ever!)
it has nice visuals (even if its a sheet of paper VS 2 cardboard boxes), with a good background, a nice fluid animation, good action, and solid humour!

did you draw the characters and the background yourself?
if yes, its awesome, and perfectly designed, good job!

(however, the weapons and the sword are created by krinkels sprites, am i right?)

i also liked the humour in this movie, such as the ''this side up'' part of the box, that got wounded during the fight, it was a clever detail...
also, i enjoyed the ending and the wild fight between the paper and the box.

you should seriously do more cartoons like this.
its smooth, its nicely animated, and its FUNNY.

keep up the good work, and keep creating cool stuff!

R-Pivot responds:

"a really cool animation, its very good. (especially if we consider that this is your first movie ever!)
it has nice visuals (even if its a sheet of paper VS 2 cardboard boxes), with a good background, a nice fluid animation, good action, and solid humour!" thank you!

"did you draw the characters and the background yourself?
if yes, its awesome, and perfectly designed, good job!" entirely, and thanks!

"(however, the weapons and the sword are created by krinkels sprites, am i right?)" yes. i was lazy at that point lol

"i also liked the humour in this movie, such as the ''this side up'' part of the box, that got wounded during the fight, it was a clever detail..." thanks :P

"also, i enjoyed the ending and the wild fight between the paper and the box." i thought the ending was terribly done to me o.o

"you should seriously do more cartoons like this. its smooth" even though its 12 fps

"its nicely animated, and its FUNNY. keep up the good work, and keep creating cool stuff!" thanks owo maybe i should make a comic series thats interactive as in .swf form based on box vs paper ^.^

thank you for your review!

Very great animation! I think the only things you could improve would be adding a better ending, maing the movie in 60 fps and maybe working a little bit on the visuals ( adding clouds, trees and so on)
Anyways, good job! ;)

R-Pivot responds:

thx -w-