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Mario Set to Wumbo + More

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This is a compilation of all the cartoons I've made this month, each being less than 30 seconds, the main of these being a Mario cartoon I've been wanting to make for a while.

I was originally going to submit Mario Set to Wumbo by itself, but I feel like it works better in a skit-show style compilation, so here's this!

Credits:

Mario Set to Wumbo:
Dr. Alex voiced by Alex Jimenez
Music:
Airport Lounge Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/

This Party is ASS:
Music:
Disco Medusae Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/

McDonald's Whatever:
Music:
Local Forecast - Elevator Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/

Cock Joke
Music:
"Tankmen" by Bungeetongue
http://bungeetounge.newgrounds.com/

Reviews


Well just like the Batman one I wants too make me blast my pants off of my butt wow plus the fast food part came out of nowhere! Good animation still :-):-) but the pacing is not that good hope you get better at that ;-)



Short but pretty funny :)



All of those shorts were very funny, especially the first one where Mario winds up turning into Wario! I actually saw that ending coming when Mario turned the M on his hat into a W, but it was still very funny nonetheless. Great job!



Funny and creative! For the donkey kick scene, I think you could have spaced it out a bit better (take a second of nothing to build anticipation, then make the kick really fast an snappy.) I think adding these pauses in could really help your pacing and make the animation more readable. I also think you need to work on drawing heads and faces (look up proko's vids on youtube to get a better understanding of the anatomy.) I really enjoyed these shorts, they are entertaining and I am amused by the ideas behind them. Keep up the good work!


artistunknown responds:

Thanks!

Yeah, the pacing on that one is a bit odd, and there was some stuff I wanted to add to it to make it seem a bit better but it was hard since it was kinda timed to the music so I had a limited number of frames to work with.

And yeah, I've been working on making my heads better. I've gotten a bit better, at least they're not blobs anymore. Still got a bit of ways to go though. I understand facial anatomy, but I'm just really lazy with it a lot of the time and I don't really pay attention to it. I'm just so stuck in trying to get stuff done as fast as possible while still having some level of quality that I tend to forget about things like that sometimes. I'll definitely try to take more time to get the facial anatomy right in the future though.

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed!

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Uploaded
May 28, 2016
3:26 AM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Parody
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  • Daily 4th Place May 29, 2016