The game has potential, but much more time should be put into it.

The loading time at start has little/no indication of how long is left. Any movement on the screen would work, at least to be clear the game hadn't crashed on launch.
The art-style has some nice assets, but textures are used repetitively, and animation varies wildly in quality. This infers they were hurriedly put together. Try to have a defined art-style, and smooth out animation.
The screen appears to be cutting out parts on all 4 sides. Please try to keep everything completely inside the frame.
The touch screen controls work for some parts, but not for others. Touch screens are rare, so this adds unnecessary screen complexity. If you intend to keep touch screen controls, they should be optional and the game should be able to work solely from them.
The time provided is a pointless addition to the screen, and is also an hour ahead on my own time.
The controls are unintuitive, and should be explained through a kind of tutorial.
The demonstration level has large empty rooms, and could be cut down.

PLEASE TEST YOUR GAME BEFORE SUBMITTING IT!!!

Problems like these should not have to be dealt with in patching.