I am not sure even what to say. There is a great story line although somewhat linear. The animations and artwork in general are very good and show a lot of promise. I will be researching this team in the future and if you love adult oriented material such as I do and want something more than crap artwork with pasted graphics and, well, shoddy everything. This is the Graphic novel for you. Kudos to your team. I for one will be adding this to this years list of patreon hopefuls. Keep it up!
1: Great storyline
2: Potential for expanded/additional novels
3: Decent art and animation (Potential is there to be great)
4: ok sex scenes (little more interaction, rewards (stills/animations in a book/download) for completion of milestones, and last maybe more variation in the scenes (amount of scenes was pretty good!).