I am not sure even what to say. There is a great story line although somewhat linear. The animations and artwork in general are very good and show a lot of promise. I will be researching this team in the future and if you love adult oriented material such as I do and want something more than crap artwork with pasted graphics and, well, shoddy everything. This is the Graphic novel for you. Kudos to your team. I for one will be adding this to this years list of patreon hopefuls. Keep it up!
1: Great storyline
2: Potential for expanded/additional novels
3: Decent art and animation (Potential is there to be great)
4: ok sex scenes (little more interaction, rewards (stills/animations in a book/download) for completion of milestones, and last maybe more variation in the scenes (amount of scenes was pretty good!).
What are proportions?
I mean seriously, people complain about some porn having dicks the size of legs, but this guy's dick is literally the size of her whole torso (excluding her breasts, which are also larger than her whole torso).
there should have been hulk cum
Considering the dick to waist ratio I was fully expecting the ending animation to be of his cock ripping through her belly and spraying blood everywhere. lol