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Apr 19, 2016 | 10:12 PM EDT

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War follows three men where ever they go. Living different lives, they came together to fight one common enemy as they journey through thick jungles in search of the "POM". Argument and philosophical topics come about as they make way from one civilization to the next encountering obvious differences. One thing for sure about this coalition is their love for toking.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

to be honest .I really didnt get the story.Your screenplay wasnt quite well planned ,that is what i can understand from your animation.Your storytelling isnt quite effective. but i liked some of the things like composition and the Backgrounds of your clip.Next time please plan out thoroughly what you are going to do , on the paper and after the pape work is done , then only proceed to animate.

moonchie2oonz responds:

Thanks for the feed back... it's actually a trailer for a series I have. The first episode would be published on 29th of this month. Hopefully you check it out and you might get a better view from my angle. I would appreciate your take on that also. Thanks for the compliment .. Cheers!