Be a Supporter!

UnTown episode 6- Saving the Towers

rated 3.46 / 5 stars
Share Links:
Comedy - Original

Click on an icon to vote on this!

Credits & Info

Apr 15, 2016 | 7:17 PM EDT

If you liked this, check these out!

Author Comments

In a mid evening day in Unreed Middle school, An assembly is brought to celebrate the mysterious coming of famous Singer "Sarah Towers". But right before she could sing, her song is foiled by Police officers. What could she have done?

Hope you guys enjoy! I used actual audio mixing this time around in another program, I'm a bit new to it, so It's not super.

Aiden Wall as Nace -
Cooper Quick as Craig -
Bree Page as Kelsey-
Michelle Tabula as Sarah-
Brandi Stone as Pedal-
Jordan J Scavone as Spokeniss, Skylar, and Principle Roosta-
Jesse Lowther as Henry-
Chelsea Rae Loduca as Madam GC, and Glare Cat-



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Getting good. Getting good. I did like the plot of this episode, it was actually rather interesting. I feel like that it may have been a little stilted because the acting is a little flat. I mean the Voice cast is getting better at this. I feel like there are a lot of fresh blood in this, also some vets. Maybe some more direction on the lines would help. Also It's best to not have a character talk out of shot if you can help it. Craig being off screen and talking is a huge flub on the staging area. I feel like that you should have panned to him. Also maybe look into a much more active camera, just having characters stand and talk, isn't as engaging. As for the battle scene it was alright, but I feel like it was held back with the relent on the models. Maybe if you broke Model more for the heavier stuff like action, it would make it flow a LOT better.

All and all, Good episode, everything is slowly but surely getting better. I feel like if this keeps going up, by episode 10, you'll have the TV show quality that we all strive for. and then it can only go up from there.

People find this review helpful!