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Jamworld Ep. #15

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Animated by James Bear
Written by James Bear

Starring:
James Bear as Himself
Jordan Comeaux as Future James
Oskar M.S. as Maverick

Backgrounds:
James Bear

Music:
JappeJJ
TheSoundFactory

Special Thanks:
Jordan Comeaux
Maverick Prince
Angel Gonzalez
Michael Fay
JappeJJ
Donut Studios
ToxicSoul77
Vannamelon
Tom Fulp
Yoav Landau
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just an eddsworld ripoff, nothing more.

Alright, so I don't know what I'm supposed to enjoy out of this. You are already having the two main characters already break up in the second season of your cartoon, that's way too early to happen in a series. We barely know anything about the characters, so why are you already having them break apart? What is the point?

The animation is heavily tweened, which isn't bad, but feels lazy. Also, why didn't you make any coloured backgrounds? Having white and grey backgrounds are so bland and makes the cartoon look even more lazy. The rest of my complaints were already stated in Remusyurov's review, so I won't say them again for your convenience.

I want to see you do cartoons, but you just seem to be doing Pivot's style with a mix of Eddsworld. You need to make original content, if not that, try to do parodies if you can think of a good idea. If you can't take constructive criticism, you won't go anywhere as an animator babe.

Okay, so I had to rewatch the thing a couple times, because i had no idea what was going on. What I got from this, is that two kids fell in love at the first sight and then did stuff and they got separated until July 6 2011
And what does that date has to do with? Does it have to do with some events from real life of the creator that we don't know about? And why should we care? This doesn't tell absolutely anything interesting and/or meaningful in terms of plot
There's a lot of stuff that doesn't make any sense to the viewer and it just feels like a mish-mash of sad things that should make us sad because it's sad, not because we should care about developed characters, which are absent here

Not to be mean or anything, but keep trying

And goddamit, i haven't seen a lot of eddsworld, but you can't deny this is tord, he even has his hoodie and haircut and everything!

Great animation style and pretty emotional story,but there is too much white and the episdoes could be longer.Great work tough.

looks good. A bit short, but i assume a part 2 is coming. i like the friend ship shown

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