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Tasty: The Beginning

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Yeah this is my first frame by frame animation! I hope you all like it. All feedback and animating tips is well received. Thank you for watching!

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Not bad! Not bad at all. There's nothing too much to work with here, except for the fact that it was a good, decent, first visual try. There's no sound or audio of any kind and things were fast paced. But those aside, it's a nice first try with experimentation. I'm giving you a decent score friend. A nice 2 in a half out of 5. And 3/5 in voting power. Continue with more future works and push yourself. I can tell you'll be a great decent animator in due time. I hope you'e enjoyed this review. Take care.

CamoSenpai responds:

Thank you its much appreciated!

Take more time to make the animations smoother. The less difference between two frames the better it will look to the viewer. Also, work on coming up with a joke or story to tell and then animate once you've plotted it out. If this was supposed to be funny, it came across as plain. I did find the character styles interesting!

Shows promise, but needs more time in the oven!

CamoSenpai responds:

Thank you I will try or these things that you have listed here.

Credits & Info

Views
919
Votes
103
Score
2.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 17, 2016
6:36 AM EDT
Genre
Experimental