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Comedy - Original

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Mar 12, 2016 | 2:29 PM EST

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Here's a short animation I put together to practice and develop my dialogue scenes for the animation. The basic premise being that Brack (the dragon) isn't very good with people and is tricked by his friend Arc into calling everyone who works for a cooperative "Comrade".

Feel free to leave comments on what you liked (or didn't) about the animation so I can slowly improve.

If you'd like to see more like this, please visit my Deviant art page: . Or my Youtube for more like this: .

Thanks everyone!



Rated 4 / 5 stars


The movements aren't what you'd call "fluid" and kinda stiff, The music faded into the background and would have put me to sleep. THAT being said, the ART of the charas. themselves is pretty good and the music isn't bad, per se. You just tune it out anyway.

Fairly good flash and looking forward to a series in the future.

JackEarthrider responds:

Thanks man, I appreciate you being honest with the critique so I really know where the weaknesses are and how I need to improve. The movements are getting better over time (they move more than they used to) though with as much detail as they have it can be tricky to have them really moving a lot.

I'm hoping eventually I can have scenes that are more 2D perspective with a lot more motion and action to kinda counter balance dialogue scenes like this.

Yeah, the music is pretty tame; but I do have some more action focused tracks that I can use for other scenes, it would have just been a weird match for a mostly dialogue scene like this one.

Definitely there will be more in the future, these just take a while to make.

Thanks for the detailed feedback!