Lord of The Flies: The Beast

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There is a beast on the island and every single kid is scared but Simon knows that the beast is inside them because he had heard what the lord of the flies told him,


Hope you revisit this. Take the time between to do other things and grow, of course. You have something really close here, but I think it can be closer. I think that you should take the time for other workings and find your way back to rediscover where you've been and where you're going. All that said, I also think you'd be well served to take a deeper look to the audio. Some of it, I could hardly understand. In case you haven't heard of it, "Animosity" is completely free, and lets you completely alter your alter (provided you check a few tutorials)... AND I do mean a "few"... I've worked with it for nearly a year now, and I'm only expanding for voice and audio work...Anways, good work and a great day... get home in one piece, and don't let the bastards chew you down.

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I liked the animation very much.
I thought the sound let it down.
The sfx timing was good but the vocal quality took me out of the toon.
I really liked the ink animation again i think its a nice style and you do it well.
overall a good short.

That was some nice animatic. Especially I liked the pig head :) Do you plan to finish it?

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The pig on head was pretty disturbing lol. But yeah, this was pretty neat. You got nice artwork and decent animation. Though I recommend you get a better microphone because the audio quality was kinda bad here. Just keep it up!

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Spinne responds:

Thanks, ShaeGuy. Good advice.

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3.19 / 5.00

Mar 6, 2016
10:57 AM EST
Comedy - Parody