Hope you revisit this. Take the time between to do other things and grow, of course. You have something really close here, but I think it can be closer. I think that you should take the time for other workings and find your way back to rediscover where you've been and where you're going. All that said, I also think you'd be well served to take a deeper look to the audio. Some of it, I could hardly understand. In case you haven't heard of it, "Animosity" is completely free, and lets you completely alter your alter (provided you check a few tutorials)... AND I do mean a "few"... I've worked with it for nearly a year now, and I'm only expanding for voice and audio work...Anways, good work and a great day... get home in one piece, and don't let the bastards chew you down.

I liked the animation very much.
I thought the sound let it down.
The sfx timing was good but the vocal quality took me out of the toon.
I really liked the ink animation again i think its a nice style and you do it well.
overall a good short.

That was some nice animatic. Especially I liked the pig head :) Do you plan to finish it?

The pig on head was pretty disturbing lol. But yeah, this was pretty neat. You got nice artwork and decent animation. Though I recommend you get a better microphone because the audio quality was kinda bad here. Just keep it up!