Sorry, but this came across as more of an opening than a "something". I think you can put a little more work and "love" into it and have a something that would really be worth contribution. It's worth exploring, but there's work to be done. There needs to be more of a story told, frankly, and you could stand to tweak or add to the lyrics as well as graphics to tell it. I won't beat you up about the quality of this so far, because I think you can see for yourself wherever it might slack either way. I just think you can see where you should have and could have done more, so I do hope you revisit this, and it will help you see where you grow as an artist along your way, but these simple works add up.
Be blessed and look forward as you go. I do hope the best for you.