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The Fanfiction Connoisseur: Salivation

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rated 1.46 / 5 stars
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Feb 27, 2016 | 4:39 PM EST

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GuardiraGuardira

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I do like what you've go but perhaps try to create a suitable, less awkward ratio for the stage (eg. 1024x576).

Also, try to slow down the timing on your more lengthy text bubbles so the viewers can get a chance to read AND process it's contents, before moving on.


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MiguelMercado responds:

They get better as they go on.