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Elementary School Story - Snowball Fight Turns Violent!

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Snowfall during school. A wondrous time but when surrounded by the winter snow, it brings out the worst in us. We create snowballs for weapons and construct forts for protection. When lunch time comes, an hour long warfare commences. When you play the game of snowball fights, you win or you die. There is no middle ground. Winter is coming, it is coming for all of us.

Listen to the story-animated tale of Lusin when he was in grade 6 and how he beat the shit out of this one kid around Christmas time.

I played and recorded the music.

Lusin's YOUTUBE ►https://www.youtube.com/Lusin333


dear Lusin

Well that escalated quickly, Nice job with the storytelling aspect and your animation style is quite interesting. It's simple and not too scintillating which is ample to enjoy. It felt like it was real for a moment but anywho, voice narration is clear and spot on, the music is mellow and not too distracting, and finally the story was alright. It could have ended on a better note but I guess the ending is fine nonetheless.

Keep it up! And Cheers!

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber

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Lusin responds:

Hey! Thanks for your review EtriusWimbleton! The story was only the truth, nothing more.

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2.80 / 5.00

Feb 13, 2016
12:58 AM EST