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A sneak peek at my junior film, The Vagabonds is an insanely fun story of maritime explorers that find literally everything except the new world.
Planning to make it a 5-6 min short to have under my belt so maybe in the future I can show it to the right people so I can at the most, pitch it.
This shows a lot of promise, though for me it fell flat with the sound. I dunno, the animation was great, but the production on the voice work and lack of any sound effects other than the gun firing and burning sound (if it was burning, or was it meant to be them swimming?) of the island as they left (as they're flapping about in water) left it feeling quite empty for me.
As a demo and pitching tool it works well, but if you're looking for things to improve or tweak for further releases I'd start with the sound - I think a little more effort with it would boost the overall flow of this significantly.
Thanks a ton man! Any advice helps, and I'll definitely work on the sound a lot more when the film is in full production!
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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