This is a really interesting Point 'n Click game you've made here, but there are some serious issues with the text. The story sections aren't properly proportioned and get lost off the right side, and for some reason all the text cuts off before the last letter. Even the PLAY button cuts off before the Y. I would highly suggest ironing those problems out.
Besides that, it's a very nicely made game. The graphics are nice to look at, and it doesn't seem to have any glitches during gameplay besides that textual anomaly. I really enjoyed all the sound effect work that went into this, as well. I would have liked to see a bit more to the game itself, but there is something to be said for something that can be played to conclusion in a handful of minutes. The inclusion of medals is much appreciated, and they all popped right up when they were supposed to.
Overall, I can see my way to giving this a solid 4/5 stars. I would probably offer up another half star if there weren't so many glaring technical issues regarding the text, which is a pretty big part of the game.