people may whine over its motion and blam it , But I think it is good as in the Effects you gave like the Foreground effect that was quite legit

There are no words to describe this. This is the kind of stuff that ggivs NG a bad reputation on the internet.

It isn't a good idea to submit videos like this under judgement. Tests, walk cycles, etc usually gets a really low score if not blamed. If you want to put green-screen effects on here, there is something called the "Dumping Grounds". It's the button next to your message button where anyone can post tests at. And with it, you can show off anything to your friends, family, and random users on here. So please do that instead.

I liked it but that's all it was it would make a badass intro though! :D