Are you stalking me?

dear jelloween

Hmmm...More of this skits I see. Judging from your second cartoon, the animation here seems more staggering but nonetheless it has discernable improvements from your last cartoons such as the painted background you had aforementioned. What lacks here though unlike my previous review is the comedy. It was a bit...Not there, Inconspicuous to be exact. And what I mean here is that its barely noticeable. However, despite that, I would suggest continuing with this concept. I like the idea of this blue shirt and pants character going through the days and struggles with the minor hindrances like the cupboard not closing here or him drawing something and ending up breaking and losing the pencil.

To be clear, the idea I would like to suggest is to make this character nonchalantly sigh at every mistake or inconvenience he struggles with during his regular day to day activities. To be broad, make his life sad because of that :P (Schadenfreude alert)