Animations pretty good but backgrounds could be better. Writing is good .
Animations great and musics good but background could be better
Really cool m8 keep it up.
Their are things I like and dislike. First let me say the animation for the most part is pretty decent, and so is the artwork. However, the lip sync was a bit off. It could've been a bit better. And try stretching out the backgrounds a bit more. Their are some scenes where white edges are showing. With this being said, it was an ok video. Could've been better, but I like it for what it is. Keep it up!
You need to work on your audio quality a little, it's really noticeable. If you don't have great software/hardware consider have some subtle music playing in the background constantly while you're characters are talking- it's a great way to hide audio flaws. Just make sure it's not too loud so you can still hear your character talking.