Not bad. The animation when smoothly, and the graphics looks really simple yet neat. Hopefully you'll consider adding some colour to the BG to this submission and any upcoming animations that you have in mind!
Sven
Not bad. The animation when smoothly, and the graphics looks really simple yet neat. Hopefully you'll consider adding some colour to the BG to this submission and any upcoming animations that you have in mind!
thanks, but actually I'm working the other way around. I used to colour everything, and animate lip sync etc but doing so made me work about 1 week for 1 minute of animation. Working so long on an animation really makes me lose interest in it and then I start rushing things and the finished product ends up being bland and unfunny. Now I animate on purpose with just black and white, only straight lines and a minimum of drawings. This way whenever I come up with a funny idea, I can animate it in 1 day. this also allows me to post weekly animations on my youtube channel. If the joke/story is good, and the drawings are funny, and the animation is smooth, then it's good enough for me. no need to do all that extra drawing/colouring work.
Pretty neat! Love the animation. Keep it up!
Maybe a little more detail and/or less "spazy" animation would improve this.
I'm not an animator, so this is the best you'll get.