I don't understand much about animation, so I can't help, but this was really well made!
Hey thanks so much!
The art was decent but you forgot to render their eyes at some parts.
Fair, but not very helpful. Thanks though! :)
this is awesome, and i can't wait to see where you're going with it.
Thanks Tyler! :) More to come!
I thought this was very well done. You have an excellent understanding of pacing and scene composition. The choice of music was very well suited for the tone you were trying to convey. One thing I liked above all here was the voice acting. It felt natural and sincere. When you see a lot of shorts with voice actors, I find a lot of the time the dialogue feels strained and disjointed you did a great job making the characters believable. I'm digging the style too. it feels very soft in the best way possible.
Don't worry about being overambitious. I do it a lot when I create an animation. it's easy to do. Just keep challenging yourself.
Keep up the great work.
4.5 stars as nothing is ever perfect.
Thank you this critique was very helpful!
This is kind of cute. :) Seems like a typical romance anime. ^^; Maybe Key Visual Arts like Clannad with the sad ending.
No offense, but the animation seems a little awkward, but I guess from the description you're already stating that you're new to this.
Well, we all have to start somewhere, right? Keep at it. :)
Also, I could tell from the name that this was going to be a series. Which reminds me, I want to see more of that series with the reaper girl which oddly might be a romantic comedy, but I forgot what it's called. XD
Thanks! This was very helpful, the story will make more sense with more installments of shorts! This was the intro into it. Also I believe the anime your talking about is: Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai