"A short film about the life of a generic office worker, repeating the same depressing, gray life"
looks like you're the first one to have this amazing idea huh?
Alright, i'm gonna be real with you, there's not even a single drop of originality in this cartoons, its just cliche after cliché.even this "mans life going on and hes not happy" idea of script is interesting.
The animation also doesnt add much, it's just this very simple drawings with no motion, and some times the camera moves.
This "life is awfull" thing just makes you look like an 14-year old who got rejected by his crush.
The idea wasn't to be goth and say all life sucks, it was more about the life of being a white collar office worker (you might have noticed that the guy was wearing a collar for the whole movie).
To be honest I am a 14 year old, I saw a short film competition for under 18's in my area and I thought i might try to earn some cash.
I agree, it was cliché but only because I only had a week to make it and I wanted to make something that wasn't my usual comedy skit (check out my channel)
Sorry that you didn't like it, but thanks for leaving a review- even if it was only two star. I will try to do better in future.