It could be a pretty good game if some more detail was added, like more ethically pleasing interface for example. Both music and sfx in this game quickly forced me to turn them off completely and play something else in the background.
The dialogue is not very well connected, as if you were trying to introduce too many ideas at the same time, making little to no sense at certain points (but not everywhere).

There should be an English translation option. Improve the graphics, and add a skip button.

Me encanto el juego....peroo!...de verdad se hace tedioso el repetir acciones y conversaciones una y otra vez, un botoncito de saltar seria muy bueno. El sistema de palabras claves es bueno, pero tengo el presentimiento que no muchos jugadores accesaran a el ni le comprenderan al momento.
En cuanto a los graficos, no soy artista,. soy una humilde jugadora, me encanto la idea y la trama, las multiples opciones, pero para tan buena trama pocos graficos, solo digo que pudieras haber agregado mas graficos, dibujos entre otros. Con referente el ingles, si, este sitio tiene juegos en Ingles, portugues, italiano y otros, no veo a otros quejandose por eso, pudieras dejarle solo en español pero considero que te limitaria enormemente, multiples opciones en cuanto a lenguaje, pudieran abrirle las puertas incluso como proyecto para ganar dinero.
I loved the game, but it`s annoying having to repeat each action, a small SKIP button would be nice, the key word system to skip could be messy and i have the feeling that many players won`t use it because they might not understand it at first. About graphics, as an humble player, i loved the idea and the plot, but you could add more graphics, drawings, depictions. Last point, about the language, being fair, there are many games in English, Portuguese, Italian...and not many are complaining about it, You cna even leave it like this but that could limit your potential, however giving the multiple option of several languages would be a great benefit and making possible this proyect to make money---
MAKE A SECOND PART....WOULD BE NICE TO SEE AN EVOLUTION.

ENGLSH:
Quite good, but lack of English language option(especially in text adventure) makes it hard to play for someone outside of Spain or South America (I don't know if it's Spanish, or Portuguese, or another similar one).

As I can't speak Spanish, I had to rely on... less than perfect translation. Due to that I couldn't completely understand story aspects and rate them properly. Sometimes I was wishing for the SKIP button, though. Lack of it was a really bad thing

Music is fitting, but nothing more. Still it's more that I would expect from most of amateur productions. Even if the quality of some pieces is lacking.

Art is average, nothing really good, nothing very bad. Characters pictures are a bit above.

Overall, a good game. Nothing outstanding in bad or good way, but it holds a solid level.

SPANISH (Google translate)

Muy bueno, pero la falta de opción de idioma Inglés (sobre todo en la aventura de texto) hace que sea difícil para jugar con alguien fuera de España o América del Sur (no sé si es español o portugués, u otro similar). Como no puedo hablar español, tuve que depender de ... menos de traducción perfecta. Debido a que no podía entender por completo los aspectos de la historia y evaluar de manera adecuada. A veces yo estaba deseando para el botón SKIP, sin embargo. La falta de que era una cosa muy mala La música es apropiado, pero nada más. Aún es más que la que cabe esperar de la mayoría de las producciones de aficionados. Incluso si la calidad de algunas piezas es insuficiente. El arte es normal, nada realmente bueno, nada muy malo. Personajes fotos son un poco por encima. En general, un buen juego. No hay nada extraordinario en el camino bueno o malo, pero tiene un nivel bueno.

SIDE NOTE:
I disagree with CupCakeLover95, as this is (in my opinion, of course) a site for beginner to intermediate game makers that wants to have opinion on their work and advice for future, and there are many works in other languages here, always were and I think pretty often it's a good thing (especially if really poor English ver. were to scare away everyone). It was obvious that game isn't in English on main page and in author comments, so why he is even surprised is beyond me.

Finally, If you can't play properly a game it doesn't necessarily means it sucks. It means it's not for you, because it requires skills you lack (linguistic ones in this case). Strategy games doesn't sucks because one has no strategy skill, nor does FPS if player has reaction time at sloth level. It just means it's not meant for those players, and they shouldn't abuse rating system.

How about you upload English games to this English website?! (or at least have an option for English)
Since I can't understand the language, I can't properly play it, so it automatically sucks!