Not bad. Just needs more depth. It would help to make the words a little bigger too. Definitely needs sound.
Long, long ago in a land far, far away there was a circle. This circle had a strange ability to change the flow of gravity. Join this Hero as he adventures threw a land filled with Spikes, Mazes and Danger.
Not bad. Just needs more depth. It would help to make the words a little bigger too. Definitely needs sound.