I kinda agree with Wackywiccan.

I liked how you made the snow effect, easy yet functional! But when "the camera" moved, the snow froze in mid-air and the sound when she is surprised was kinda "scratchy".

But don't give up, you are heading the right way! :)

/Ohamano

Well, it was short and to the point. The advice is true, although I'm not sure how helpful it will be. Sound was okay. Art was okay. Keep it up. You are on the right track.

what the fuck is this

bad animation, overused sound effect, unoriginal humor. try again.