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My first sprite animation hope you enjoy sorry no sound

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Notbad

Well here was notbad of a flick even if it was some sprites they we're not super shiny but still made for a decent story here and animation seemed like it could have been smoother and more fluid like but for your first here this was pretty good and I can see you making this better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smooth out the animation a lil better

~X~

Not bad for your first animation! The sprite work itself is smooth, there's a pun and other fun, but the sound... that really makes a huge difference! It feels almost like the sound is what gives the animation life, what makes it more than an image. Hopefully there will be in future animations? Keep it going!

-cd-

i will be 100% honest with you.
in the beginning, i thought ''oh my god, not another super-mario+sonic crossover, filled with the adventures of super-sonic-mario man! WTF?!''
but i was pleasantly surprised when i saw that your sonic-mario movie was actually nicely animated, the sprites were used in a correct way, and the story/action that was going on was actually pretty good and funny!
(i liked the duel between super-sonic-mario and the wasp-thingy, it was pretty funny.)
also, the part where sonic froze instead of falling from the game-stage like mario did was quite original, in terms of the ''character taking damage''-way.... p)
oh, and i liked that instead of goompas, that you have added the blue-jelly monsters as super-sonic's enemies.

last but not least, having the mario-hat attached in sonic's head while his character was running/jumping/attacking/dodging, was a really difficult task, so i will give you good points for that as well! :D

(also, the hat was animated in such a way, that, when sonic was falling, he would lose his hat after an attack, or, the hat would move slightly when he would jump/run/dodge something too fast.
that was also a nice detail, with a hint of physics added into a sprite movie.
thats good.)

overall, it was a good movie.
however, in your next movies, try to include original characters as well, and always maintain your good sense of humour in your movies.
funny scenes and humour are the best elements in a movie, imho.

good work.

Very smooth sprite animation, I really enjoyed this, it had some great visually comedic parts! Get some music and sound in there. Nice work.

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993
Votes
147
Score
2.33 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 28, 2015
10:31 PM EST
Genre
Action