Nice job.
-Lax

honestly, the art is okay but there are 2 things in here that are awful, the voice acting and story. The voice action sounds like the crappy stuff low-budget games from the 90's would get, no emotion, and the story doesn't go anywhere. if this is supposed to be a comedy, the the plot doesn't have to be there at all, and if there is one, you dont have to take it anwhere, but if this is a drama or something focused on its story and character interactions, then do something with it. oh, and it wasn't clear if this was a comedy or like a story. so, next time, try harder on the voice acting or get different people to it, and have the story or scenario make sense